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Open Poetry #3

Longing For You

Carolina Girl
Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 63

0 posted 1999-10-25 09:59 PM

Fingers outstretched and grasping
Wanting to feel your touch.

Lips moist, waiting and parted
Wanting to taste your kiss.

Eyes open and desperately searching
Wanting to see your soul.

Arms reaching to hold and keep you
Wanting to embrace you for eternity.

Within my head, I hear your heart beating;
My desires grow stronger with every pulse.

Now the love of my life is devastating:
No loving touch, no tender kiss,
No warm embrace or sight of you.

And the only heartbeat that exists,
Is the alarm clock.

Fingers outstretched and grasping
Lips moist, waiting, and parted
Eyes open and desperately searching
Arms reaching to hold
The moment my dreams come true.

I'm trying... my feelings are so strong right now.... bear with me as I search for words and style. *HUGZ*

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-10-25 10:02 PM

You've done well in finding them so far, CG. Beautiful job.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-10-25 11:17 PM

Your emotions are very strong here, Carolina Girl. They form their own style and its beautiful.

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

3 posted 1999-10-25 11:58 PM

Really liked this Carolina Girl. Filled with
emotion, lovely work!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-26 04:26 AM

This was lovely.....well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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