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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-09 01:55 PM


i was so full of pride
nice guy floating down the same
all believe in vain
so i help you build your little name
even saving the rage
vampire so like the world
sent to blame
and drain
all thats good from me
i do hold on
to spite you so
not for lofty goals
just for pain
you refuse to know..



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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-10 12:33 PM


"i do hold on
to spite you so
not for lofty goals
just for pain
you refuse to know"
Oh, very nice!!

Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871
Minnesota
2 posted 1999-10-25 09:12 PM


I agree with Hoot...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-26 04:49 AM


Loved this one! Very well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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