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Winter Morning Welcome
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Winter Morning Welcome |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Pain rolling across my head At times like these I'm better off dead OH God! Do I really have to get out of bed? The sun is up, but cold are my toes My eyes are red and stuffed is my nose Well to be honest I'm totally froze The alarm is blaring, but I don't care Damn but this is just too unfair! I'll just snuggle up with my bear An hour past and the alarm still rings Now even the damn bird sings This is what the morning brings Then in a move so totally bold I jump in the shower and horrors untold Cursing and yelling about this cold! 6 inches of snow has just struck I'm late for work, in traffic stuck Winter is here, just my luck! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You only feel like this on a winter morning ? I feel like that every morning ! LOL Loved it ! ; ) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I can relate to this my friend. It is only Fall here but it is dark when I get up and by the time I am through with the kids activities, dark. The chill of snow threatens in the air and cold's abound. I am ready for spring again and winter hasn't hit yet...LOL. |
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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
Enjoyed it! ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Winter? Whazzat? (you have my sympathies) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Don't remind me...LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's 95 in Calif. today What is this winter anyway? Great poem--I did feel a chill as I read it. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hehe - I'm just entering a lovely lovely summer...mind you having said that, that means I'm still here and not in America which means I'm still divided...you lucky thing! Like the poem btw - simple and effective. |
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EnglishRose Junior Member
since 1999-10-08
Posts 13 |
good job sis, liked it a lot,,, ------------------ "A Rose by any other name..." |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Love the poem Watcher. This is the feeling I used to wake up to. But now that I'm retired, wake up at the same time, just go back and hibernate some more! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, yep, yep....winter stinks! I think we should all move to Florida or California with all those warm wonderful poet friends of ours!  .....LET'S GO EVERYBODY!------------------ Denise |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Brrr....I think I've seen snow before... On my TV in warm sunny California!!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
The only time I see snow is when I shake those little snow globes...LOL. There is a cold front over my part of Florida now...its in the 40's tonight. I love it! Come and visit, Watcher! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher, I can relate to this, but from my past. I moved to Florida. Well done. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exactly watcher! I live in Minnesota, and I know exactly what this feels like...good work!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
blagh watcher not bout the poem loved it but i just got over a cold yucky o and we even get em in texas and not everyone is a millionaire |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Yesterday was our first below-freezing morning here and people are already comparing this year to last and saying, "Was it this cold this early last year?" A frustrating experience to realize summer is gone. Well written. ------------------ No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space... |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thank-You all for reading.Just a day in the life of the Catskill,where there is 9 months of winter and 3 months of poor sledding! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
lol.. sounds like me every morning.... cept the snow... don't do snow.. hot house plant here.......just sleep in! |
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