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Ohme
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-10-25 07:25 PM

Awaiting Dawn

As morning glories turn their head to greet the rising sun
their petals slowly open to kiss the rays of light.
Their smooth, velvet contours caress an anxious breeze
that calms the gusts of restless blowing wind.
Moments passing by will pause to stand at full attention
then flutter away, forever lost in some infinity.
Every fragile moment beguiles the pathway of the sun
till it has crossed the vastness of the sky.
Then losing its identity, it slips below horizons,
leaving morning glories to the loneliness of night.
Like these little lovely flowers, I sleep alert in expectation
awaiting dawns when I can turn to you.

[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 10-25-1999).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-10-25 07:42 PM

Nice imagery here, Ohme. I like 'forver lost in some infinity' - lovely!

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 1999-10-25 08:08 PM

WoW! One of the best things I've read all day! Like the imagery and just the way it reads. Really enjoyed the last two lines. Thanks for sharing.

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

3 posted 1999-10-25 10:11 PM

Thanks, Severn and Scott. I took a long deep dive into my emotions and when I came up for air, this was what I was holding on to. Appreciate your comments.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-25 10:17 PM

This is most beautiful, Ohme! I really enjoyed this.

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Denise

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-10-25 10:26 PM

Truly exquisite, Ohme..what a lovely picture you paint.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

6 posted 1999-10-25 11:10 PM

Great imagery Ohme! Enjoyed this one!

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 1999-10-25 11:23 PM

I agree with all, Ohme. This is excellent.

Christopher

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since 1999-08-02

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Purgatorial Incarceration

8 posted 1999-10-26 03:39 AM

Awesome!
Vivid!

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

9 posted 1999-10-26 03:40 AM

Liked this much!Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 1999-10-26 08:49 AM

Ohme, this is fantastic, so very vivid, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

11 posted 1999-10-26 09:08 AM

Thanks to all of you.I'm glad to know that this, one of my favorites, has something special about it!

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

12 posted 1999-10-26 10:57 AM

Ohme...you did it again ! Beautiful ! : )

tori
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since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

13 posted 1999-10-26 11:10 AM

Ohme I truly enjoyed the read.... such a wonderful picture you've painted here...
Give ya an A+ in art class....!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 1999-10-26 11:40 AM

Ohme,
Enjoyed the read, well done.

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