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Thoughts at first light
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Thoughts at first light |
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s.h.lim New Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 1 |
I hold you asleep beside me this morn feeling you close but yet so far away I touch softly and tenderly your eyes, your nose and tracing lovingly your soft lips My fingers move to caress your hair inhaling its fragrance as it fills the air Smiling down at what is to me a beautiful and contented face Lost in the world of your dreams But yet quietly still in my embrace You cannot know how much you mean to me For only I know true and sincere it has come to be And since I can only watch you sleep Then I shall, with all the words keep Say them to you in the open when you at last awaken |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
*sigh* how very soft and lovely this is...  I like it very much. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
oh, I do so like the images I get with this one......very nicely done and welcome to Passions |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What lovely sentiments! I enjoyed every word! And welcome to Passions! I know you will love it here! ------------------ Denise |
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