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Our Noahs arc
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Our Noahs arc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Our Noahs arc Stars recite like floating lights Lighting the chasm of the night. And lodestar the infinite way Extending the finite of day. We commute on a ship of thoughts Weather happy or over wrought. Traveling at the speed of relief. To attain a seat of belief. We seek the fantasy of love In the infinite up above. Launching our own Noahs arc To find a park to disembark. The island is a mystic place A mantic of extended space. Different to each this primal beach. And therefore difficult to reach. It is a vivid, built of ID and A little bit back of the eyelid. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent!! Loved this!!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A ship of thougths, what a wonderful concept. I liked this very much. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Reminds me of all of here at Passions. Really liked this very very much! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us. >Stendhal |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
The last couplet was quite clever -- made me smile, it did. Thanks for sharing! --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
We commute on a ship of thoughts very nice line |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher,Martie, Julie, sky and hoot, I thank you one and all You made my day. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Seymour! 'We commute on a ship of thoughts', great line and the next as well, very clever play on words. I also loved 'Traveling at the speed of relief'. Well...I just loved the whole piece! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for reading and understanding the poem. |
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