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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA 
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I wish I had the words to say What it is you need to hear I wish I had a magic wand To make the future clear I wish I could take your hand in mine And say, "Take this path, this way!" I wish I was close enough to hug you Whispering, "Babe, tomorrow is another day." I wish you could see the you I see The one that is in my heart I wish you realized that what I hope for Took me nearly a decade to start I wish I could spend the weekend with you Alone, simply you and me We could laugh and play, sing and dance Together, be set free ********************************** ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... those wishes sound familiar! *G* |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Great one Julie. Who is this written for? Anyone I know? :-) ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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starchild Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 59manchester, england |
cool. will someone please cast a flashing glance across one of mine? |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Hi Julie: Loved the poem. I enjoy your work. But, I am with Tara.... who is the mystery person? ------------------ Courage is the price that life exacts for granting peace with yourself. --Amelia Earhart |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loked this much.Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Suthern, Starchild, and Watcher 666, thank you all for your kind words! Tara and Shawn, you really think I will tell? Are you crazy?! Neither of you know him anyway.....but he was pleased as punch that I not only wrote this, but posted it here for the world to see! Life is truly grand!  ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Deli New Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 2Arkansas |
Great poem Jules! I can picture the scenes! I love this site,,, |
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