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Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX

0 posted 1999-10-24 05:46 PM


(suggestions for a new title welcome)

Messengers of prayers taken Above
Protecting with softness of their kisses
till the quiet hour sings-never misses
my words heard with rose-colored love.

My angel embraced me with affection
comforting my soul with essence of jasimine;
an urgent delivery for the Lord to face-sublime
of my deepest heart-felt confession.

Having the power of vision to teach
when I have nutured blindness
unaware of charity and kindness
blessings of truth within my reach.

Peeking into my dreams as I sleep
bouquets of thoughts transcended,
moonlit sight magically extended;
glory restored within my soul so deep.

Crystal ladders climb to the celestial side,
shining upon the Earth forevermore,
faith on this human travesty restored,
leaving behind echoes of mercy complied.

Whispers of love, a watchful eye;
freedom to seek the Lord's assistance
when my heart has hardned to resistance
sweet angel in the distant northern sky.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal



© Copyright 1999 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-10-24 05:55 PM


How very gentle and sweet, this piece.
I love the vision of "Crystal ladders climb to the celestial side". Very beautiful.
Enjoyed this much Julie....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
2 posted 1999-10-24 06:10 PM


Thank you Pepper, it means a lot to hear your words of praise. (((hugs)))

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-24 09:06 PM


Lovely sentiments, Julie. I also loved the crystal ladders reference. How about that for a title?
Now you owe me one more song!

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Denise

Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
4 posted 1999-10-24 09:59 PM


Excellent suggestion Denise...too bad can't change it on the forum but I can in my personal folder. Thanks.
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