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Ominous
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

0 posted 1999-10-24 02:27 AM

She comes upon,
the gates of hell.
She's here for him,
her soul to sell.

She loved him much,
and so to save his life,
she travelled here,
to become Hate's wife.

She gave up hers,
in order to save his.
And when they last parted,
she realized what love is.

Now she looks upon these words,
trembling with fear.
'Abandon all hope,
ye who enter here.'

The tears, they start to flow,
down her lovely cheek.
She wipes them all away,
afraid of looking weak.

The gates they start to sway,
revealing the world beyond.
The moment she walks through,
the world she knows is gone.

Knowing this is her mission,
the reason of her life itself.
She enters into that world of hate,
her hopes and dreams, they melt.

The transition now has begun,
her earthy beauty fades,
her mind no longer belongs to her,
she's lost within a haze.

Now she stands here,
wings of black and eyes of red.
It's that horrible drug hate,
she has been fed.

She throws back her head and wails,
she looks high up above.
The she strangely smiles.
"I did this all for Love."

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Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light

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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-24 02:30 AM

Awesomely crafted tale my friend, worth the wait it is.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-24 02:31 AM

Well done. I like it much.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-24 02:55 AM

Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Ominous
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

4 posted 1999-10-25 12:08 PM

I greatly thank the three of you.

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Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light

DreadedOne
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 51
Odessa, TX

5 posted 1999-10-25 05:27 AM

I think all love is dangerous, great poem though.

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