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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Each day She enchants me like morning's dew With new born shadows passing thru. Like odors, of the dawn of morn From scented flowers still unborn. She delights me with downy gay Like bobbing butterflies at play. She chitchats like the birds that sing Their wakefulness of new born spring. She steeps her humor like a tea And serves the doses guiltlessly. With plumb uniqueness of a child And wisdom of the undefiled. She banquets me. A shameless spread. And though enchantment is inbred Creation of our common needs I am in awe, her common deeds. A constant play of Santa Claus And I a child of wild applause. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 10-24-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful,so sweet! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Seymour this is enchanting! I absolutely love it!  ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It is incredible to see how far you have come, Sy. Beautiful work here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher, Thank you for the sweet. Denise, Thank you for the enchanting. Balladeer, And thank you for the beautiful work. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, this was so good. You sing such a sweet song. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Oh, this was positively magical! What a beautiful picture you have painted here, Mr. Tabin. Applause is in order. --K. ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've got to agree with M&M here, Sy... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Seymore this is fantastic...you just keep getting better and better! I am a true fan of your poetry! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore, what a nice job you did with this piece. Nothing more precious than love that has stood the test of time. You and your wife are very lucky to feel this way about each other after so many years May you share many more |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Sings sweet is good. thank you. sky, Magical is even better, thank you Nan, I treasure your remarks, thank you. Caroline, Fantastic is splended, thank you. Hoot, I always look for your remarks, thank you. |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
Great poem, a true delight to read. Dread |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dread, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderful, indeed, Seymour. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Delightful Sy! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Big smiles, Seymour... Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, Thanks for the wonderful. Pepper' thanks for the delightful. Suthern, thanks for the smiles. |
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