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sparrow
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0 posted 1999-10-25 04:29 PM


The Mind's Confusion

The Thoughts are flowing
as my mind is molding
Into something not seen
at least not as keen
As the mind that's created
even then faded
Inside my head
at least 'till I'm dead


Copyright 1998

This was the first poem of mine that I ever memorized, mostly 'cuz most of mine are really long ;}
It is also one that has many many meanings to it, so I can't really claim that it stands for any one of them. I feel poetry stands for whatever the reader thinks it does.

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

© Copyright 1999 sparrow - All Rights Reserved
sparrow
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 33

1 posted 1999-10-25 04:30 PM


hehe, as a webmaster and co-owner of a Web Design company, you'd think I could get the formating right ;}

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-10-25 04:33 PM


I enjoyed this piece and have felt the same way on occation. Webmaster hmm...Could you help me with something?..LOL..j/k.
sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33

3 posted 1999-10-25 04:37 PM


Actually I end up helping more people than I have as paying customers ;}

The company is just starting out, but I've been giving tips and stuff for about a year now, any time you need something just ask ;}

I'm also on ICQ nights, do a search on "sparrow_hawk@bigfoot.com".

In repayment for advise/critiques/help, all I ask is that you keep me in mind if someone mentions to you about needing to hire someone to make a site for them ;}

I'm kinda hoping that this will be able to fund my anthologies...

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 1999-10-25 04:48 PM


bigfoot.com..isn't that Lousianna area? I was just kidding about the help.
sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33

5 posted 1999-10-25 04:54 PM


Bigfoot is global, but I do live in Louisiana, Lake Charles actually.

And in case anyone else from Lake Charles or the surrounding area pops in here, I host Poetry Readings at Dag's on Tuesdays at 7:00.

I'm horrible at promotion, so it's taking us a bit of time to kick off, but we're going to keep at it until we have every local poet showing up at least once a month ;}

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 1999-10-25 05:01 PM


It would be a joy to be part of your poetry reading. Woe is me. I reside in Canada therefore it is impossible. I should see if I can find such an animal here.
sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33

7 posted 1999-10-25 05:16 PM


Well, let me know if you find one, or if you decide to start one, and can at least list it in the "events" section of my site ;}

And I'd love to meet you should you have the opportunity to visit, or perhaps one day I'll make a list of all my Canadian Internet acquaintances and go on a really cold road trip ;}

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

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