The Vision Of The Old Eyes

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Open Poetry #3

The Vision Of The Old Eyes

PoeticPreacher
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 28
jkljkj

0 posted 1999-10-21 03:07 AM

The Vision Of The Old Eyes

Look into the vision of those old eyes.
You’ll see dark clouds and light clouds
Over sunny and taunting skies.

You’ll see rainbows and sunsets,
That cover many treasures.
You’ll also see the storms of life poured in
Without measure.

Look into the vision of the old eyes.
You’ll see an old heart taunted by
Life’s poking stick.
You’ll also see the splendor of a
Determination that refused to quit.

Listen to the vision of those eyes
For this is what they speak to you...
Before you can progress,
You must let me through.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 1999-10-21 08:39 AM

Yo...Rhyim' Reverend,.....well done...well thought out....words to be taken seriously.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 1999-10-21 01:29 PM

I liked it, read it again, and liked it even more.

Well done!

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 1999-10-21 01:37 PM

There is a lot to be leaned from old eyes. Loved the line, "life's poking stick". Well done!

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 1999-10-21 02:04 PM

Very Well Done!
Liked this alot.....thanks for sharing Preacher........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-21 07:56 PM

I enjoyed this one very much!

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Denise

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-10-21 08:06 PM

I throughly enjoyed this.

Jenny

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

7 posted 1999-10-22 08:09 AM

Brilliant..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

8 posted 1999-10-22 02:43 PM

Good read! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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