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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-22 02:31 AM


Dance your hearts away
there is nothing for me
here today or anyday
with those people
dancing everywhere
to them i dont exist
just some person at the bar
sat for two hours
gets lost in the crowd
so i go to the balcony
so high i want to see them all
in plain view
as they dance..the music blaring
never even know that im staring
all alone
and they are so happy
wouldnt dream of ripping
that from their happy little hands
but ive become jealousy
envy till infinity
i want it so bad
need it to live again
but i wont take that from them..
my unknowing innocent friends
may their fun and my lonliness
never cease to end..


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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-22 02:55 AM


Boy, do I ever know how you feel. I know it seems unlikely now, but try to cheer up, because in time you will be recognized as important...

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-22 02:39 PM


Nothing like being alone in a crowd room.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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