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Open Poetry #1

My beautifull angel

Enrique
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 52
San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-05 01:26 AM

I sit in the darkness all alone
my demons tourment me with my feelings
they have stripped me of all happiness
and hope
all i do now is pray for some sort of
savior
to deliver me from this hell i have for so long lived in
a ray of light breaks the darkness
causing my demons to scatter
and i see you
i look into your eyes as you extend your hand
as i grasp your hand hope overfills my body
i have longed for this moment for so long now
i thought it was out of reach
far to gone to be had again
but now i might have it back...

- Enrique

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-07-05 04:40 AM

Very deep. I like what you are saying here. It flows well without rhyme. That is not an easy task. It isn't the best I have ever read, but it sure isn't the worst. Good poem. Look forward to more.

jfreak

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