Open Poetry #1 |
Redemption |
beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
As I peer into my essence I am frightened at what I see. A brooding boy. As the boy looks inside He is saddened at what he sees.
The newborn looks To the boy. The boy, To the young man who sees his father. Stripped of his control over a family. He pities this blinded shell of a man. By some miracle he finds strength. He forgives. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Wow! Can I breathe now? So intense. Poignant work. The last words, "he forgives", very powerful. |
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