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one voice
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 38
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-07-02 02:46 AM

I long for your smooth subtleties,
and your desire for intellect.
I long for your honor of femininity
and your respect for emotion.
I long to love your gentleness, your kindness, your tenderness, your enthralling excitement!
I could sweetly lose myself.
Might your timing be so perfectly appropriate?
Would you be tender when I need tenderness?
Would you be serious when I need seriousness?
Would you be intellectual when I muxt voice my opinion?
All of these qualities I long to find...
I long for them to combine, creating this amazing equilibrium, and the result would coincidently equal: everything I've ever wanted in a man...
I would feel so pretty.
I would feel so sexy.
I would feel so honored and cherished...
Oh, when will you find me?

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-02 02:53 AM

This piece hits very close to home, it stirs up quite a hornet's nest. I thoroughly enjoy it.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 1999-07-02 03:00 AM

Romeo, Romeo, can't you get here in time??!!I truly enjoyed it onevoice, let me know if you find Him!

one voice
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 38
Billings, MT USA

3 posted 1999-07-02 04:00 AM

Thank you to the both of you... az, Trust me, if I find him, EVERYONE will know! lol!

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-07-02 09:54 AM

When you do find him, let me be the first to crown him "luckiest man alive". Wonderfully written.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-07-02 12:33 PM

If you find a man like that, may I clone him so I can have one too (Balladeer - isn't this YOU?)

Fred Hobbs
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US

6 posted 1999-07-02 08:39 PM

one voice,

This is a great poem and a great statement. You are certainly very talented and resourceful. If you find him and he has a sister...........

sandman

one voice
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 38
Billings, MT USA

7 posted 1999-07-04 02:33 AM

Hey y'all! If I find him, there will plenty to go around! lol

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

8 posted 1999-07-05 12:36 PM

Thanks for the poem. It made me cry. I found the man of my dreams but God has taken him home. Thanks for bringing him back for a moment.

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