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evolution Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22ma, usa |
pain i have never known sprung from my only joy all alone i ache for you trying to find myself lost in a labryinth of emotion i dont know what i feel i wish i didn't feel i wish i never found love love wont wait for me love will not find love love forms a marriage with hurt and i am trapped searching for hope engulfed by despair this spectrum of feelings passes through transparent me limp,lifeless and shallow drowning in an emotional suicide striving to find myself who am i what are you the realization i lost you is hard to imagine if i could just shed this skin and start new it would be so easy but you have squeezed the life, the love out of me |
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JuLiEt Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 44Abbotsford,British Columbia, Canada |
This poem is great, really hits home with a lot of people in bad relationships. Wonderfully done. ------------------ ~*JuLiEt*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Hope you enjoy your time here. There is a lot of raw emotion in your poem! I await more posts from you!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's the way it is, yeah |
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