Effects of Strange Dreams Created by Little Naps

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Open Poetry #1

Effects of Strange Dreams Created by Little Naps

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 1999-08-21 03:35 PM

The storms are about tonight,
As I turn and kick in my bed.
Residue of dreams follows me,
To the solace of awakening,
And I am intoxicated,
By the mere thought of words.
How strange to open drowsy eyes,
To the sound of the wind,
Calling my name from far reaching realms.
How it stirs things deep within,
To see the rain tapping at my window,
Drops throw themselves at the glass,
Waiting like serenading lovers,
To cover my shoulders,
While walking through trees,
And flirting with the lightning.
I follow many paths,
And change nightly.

Sue
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

1 posted 1999-08-21 04:00 PM

Evocative, and beautifully written.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-08-21 04:10 PM

I've always liked your imagery! This is excellent!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-08-21 07:54 PM

I am impressed! I get lost in my dreams - to the extent that they often become like memories. Who knows but that we don't just enter another actual world when we sleep! Awesome, beautiful work.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-08-21 11:05 PM

Maybe we indeed do go to another world when we sleep...wouldn't that be lovely? A beautiful piece of work.

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