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Bunnie45
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since 1999-07-03
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bedford

0 posted 1999-07-03 11:57 PM


Beneath the tall oak tree
I wait for my love
Consumed by lust
We meet and become free
One with the wind
Scattered like dust

Scrambling to the ground
Two bodies mingle
Touching and pleasing
With a sensuous sound
Lust turns up the heat
Our bodies teasing

Lust becomes the weaker
I moan with anticipation
Rocking up and down
My hips are so eager
Cries of pleasure escape
With a Satisfying sound

He stradles his success
With each passing thrust
Touching pelvis to pelvis
Taking more and not less
Each moan echoing louder
As pleasure becomes his.

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Pam Smith

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-07-04 12:24 PM


Excellent. If you can write this erotically, want to try the Adult Forum?
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-01-04 04:28 AM


wow! it's hot in here!
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