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Soleil
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since 1999-06-12
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0 posted 1999-06-14 05:25 PM


Random Thought

A change of address, a life reversal
Can cause a spiritual suicide-
Despondency that is universal,
And those so chosen find they cannot cry.

You must know what you are going to say
When choosing to address this solemn state
Because as you may see a named new day
Those chosen may see it as somewhat late.

In trying to find a way to awake
A given spirit driven down to dirt,
One must draw life from within life to make
An attempt to resolve the causal hurt.

When waking life meets peace in reunion,
Then change and spirit will find communion.

© Copyright 1999 Soleil - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-06-14 10:19 PM


Another thing I enjoy about your work is that you write about life's truths - as I prefer to do, myself...





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 06-14-99).]

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-04-13 11:28 PM


I really like this.....
I'm not really sure what to say tonight.  I'm just digging around the archives....in search of what I'm not sure.
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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