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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 1999-06-24 11:09 PM




In Noah’s world I’m redundant
where twos are all the rage
a third cat makes no sense
at all, there’d be fighting in the cage.

I walk behind the twosome
biting my tongue in frustration
head held down in anger and pain
and seethe in my own aggravation.

Once I was part of a couple’s duet
it was my choice to walk out on my own
and now, faced with a crowd of the three
I still prefer to walk alone.

I find someone that I can care about,
we become two and it’s fine
then someone steps in and confiscates
the place that I chose as mine.

So what can I do to find
a partner who wants only me
where do I find someone who
will place me, before we three.

© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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1 posted 1999-06-24 11:16 PM


Poet,

Darling way to approach the old 'two's company, three's a crowd' notion! Bravo!

~Genea

Miss Behavin'
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2 posted 1999-06-25 07:13 AM


.....ummmm.. Grab a partner, climb on the arc, lock the door behind ya, and find a good flood?????? It takes a force of nature, for sure...

sea_of_okc
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3 posted 1999-06-25 02:48 PM


Geez deVine, I've never tried a threesome!
Is it really that bad? (giggling inanely)

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-06-25 06:31 PM


Sandman, meet me in the alley and I'll tell you all about a threesome...better yet, I'll write a poem for you....
Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-06-25 09:53 PM


Devine one, if I ever got together with you, it would be a threesome, cause I would be beside myself!!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 1999-06-25 11:55 PM


Oh, the image it brings to mind! Your talent is worth 4 or 5 of mine..so it would be a sextsome (Is that what a group of 6 is?)



wayoutwalt
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7 posted 1999-06-26 12:50 PM


no poet that would be sexsalot
Fred Hobbs
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8 posted 1999-06-26 10:34 AM


Poet,
There aren't always three
'Cause sometimes there's more
Just peek out and see
The wolf's at your door

Sad but true....Great poem though. As usual.

sandman

Miss Behavin'
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9 posted 1999-06-26 04:41 PM


Wolfie!!! I didn't know you were heading to the U.S... Silly goose..

Wolfgang
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10 posted 1999-06-26 05:52 PM


Three is indeed a crowd so this goose is flying the coop!
Justbleu
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11 posted 2003-04-13 11:40 PM


I'm just looking through the archives seeing what interesting pieces of work I can find.....This is one of them.  I enjoyed your humor as always.  Almost everyday I wish I could go back to the summer of '99.  It seems like forever ago for me.  
Anywayz, I'm not going into that.  
Take Care,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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