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Open Poetry #1

Terror

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-07-02 04:42 AM

Your knees are weak, your mouth is dry. Before you think, escapes a cry.

Burning pleasure, I am surcease, eternal treasure, eternal release.

Your body sags, your mind drags. Death you can defy but not I.

I am power, I am greed, I am tears, upon you I feed.

Action, movement, numbing pain. Battle release, emotional drain.

Sign, sigils, announce my return. I have the power, I'll make you burn.

You cannot fight, you cannot change, I am eternal, my actions pre-arranged.

©1992 DreamEvil
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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-09-99).]

one voice
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 38
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-07-02 04:45 AM

DreamEvil..... this is frightening in a way... very good use of emotion!

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-07-02 04:54 AM

Fear can be a wonderful thing. Thank you.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-07-03 01:29 AM

Just bringing this forward.

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

4 posted 1999-12-15 12:21 PM

Awesome work!
What causes the most terror? Those things
which we cannot control...
that last line says so much.

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