Open Poetry #1 |
You Belong to Me |
Elizabeth
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Almost made my tears fill with tears out of envy for my own personal reasons. |
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Elizabeth
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Thank you Artur, for your kind words. Oh, and by the way, I love your e-mail address. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Beautifully written about true love. Cherish every day. |
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Elizabeth
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Just wanted to see what anyone else might think of this one, so I'm bringing it back up to the top. And thanks, Lost Dreamer! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well.... now that he's had nearly two months with you..... is he still there??? lol ... a very sweet poem. hugs |
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Elizabeth
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Thanks, Long John. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Elizabeth, what a lovely poem.I know you did not write it for me. Still, it is eerie to read my dream described so accurately by someone else. A shiver down my spine. Thanks. [This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-25-99).] |
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Elizabeth
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Wow! How nice, traveler-would you mind telling a little more about your dream, if it isn't too personal? I'll say this-even I didn't know how close this was to my own life until after I wrote it. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This cpuld be the first time I've seen the line "He willingly gave himself to her". Normally it's the other way around. I love it! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderfully beautiful work, Elizabeth!!! I love it! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is the reason we should all 'surf' into the archives a little. Gems like these all too often are read quickly and replaced by 'multiple' postings. I love this, Elizabeth! Beautiful and tender! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I agree with Poet deVine. This is a beautiful piece, and really touching! I loved it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
" All of the above" Elizabeth..I loved it. Dark Angel |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice Job Elizabeth |
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Elizabeth
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Thank you guys so much...*blush* ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Talon Junior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 33Los Angeles |
Yes definitely very beautiful poetry. Romantic and intimate. Thank you for sharing it with us Elizabeth |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
My dream? Well, if I can find a way to get a meter and rhyme to it. Maybe in the prose section.Thanks for asking, Elizabeth. [This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-27-99).] [This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-27-99).] |
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Elizabeth
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Thanks, Talon! Traveler-I'll be looking! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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