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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-26 02:49 AM

By truth I will arise
from the ashes of the lies
that coat
my honeyed tongue.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-08-26 02:55 AM

Nicely done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-26 11:55 AM

Not a single wasted word.....short, yet powerful!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-08-26 12:03 PM

This is good DE... I like it alot.. hehe.. Im sorta lost for words, I just woke up.. lol

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-08-26 12:15 PM

DE,
This is very very good.
I pat you on the back
This morsel power snack

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-08-26 03:01 PM

This one would just NOT leave my head until I put it down. Thank you.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 1999-08-26 03:48 PM

I liked it as well.....(And all this time I thought "Wizdom" was the capability of being able to pee accurately?)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 1999-08-26 04:18 PM

Sixteen little words. Amazing what one can say if they are put in the right order.

Well done, Sir!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Talon
Junior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 33
Los Angeles

8 posted 1999-08-26 04:54 PM

Condensed and thought provoking DreamEvil. Love the formatting too. How do you center the lines?

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

9 posted 1999-08-26 08:56 PM

Truth is beauty. Beauty is truth.

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

10 posted 1999-08-26 09:05 PM

Good tidbit!

[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 08-26-99).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

11 posted 1999-08-26 09:08 PM

Hallelujah! The truth does that to ya, nags ya. Glad ya got it down. Lot of meanin!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

12 posted 1999-08-26 09:11 PM

Puts me in mind of a phoenix. I like!

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

13 posted 1999-08-27 12:34 PM

Powerful Dream, very powerful.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

14 posted 1999-08-27 01:15 AM

....'would not leave my head until I put it down'....words of a true poet.

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