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Open Poetry #1

Summer Love

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

0 posted 1999-06-24 04:58 PM

A saucer moon
That lay in the skies;
Black velvet
On a warm summer night.

Diamonds on the water,
Sand beneath your feet;
Child of a thousand fantasies,
Always dancing to a different beat.

A single red rose
Falls from your hand;
Its velvety petals
Scatter upon the sand;

And the waves wash over you,
Taking with them
The life I once knew,

Leaving nothing behind
But memories
Of a love that was true.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 1999-06-24 05:11 PM

"And the waves wash over you"...I love it! I always enjoy reading your work, and looking forward to more.

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

2 posted 1999-06-24 05:15 PM

Thank you, Satiate! :-)

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-06-25 05:33 AM

Impassioned piece, I love the scene it brings to mind. Quite a sharp turn to it.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-06-25 08:28 AM

Very nice, indeed - Krystal

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

5 posted 1999-06-25 12:37 PM

Thanks, guys! Your comments mean a lot to me. :-)

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2004-07-04 11:23 PM

very nice

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