Open Poetry #1 |
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Death of the Barefoot Butterfly |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA ![]() |
..Just a short one before I hit the road for North Carolina. This poem was the title of a book I wrote and also explains my philosophy of poetry. The book still sits in my desk drawer...... "The barefoot butterfly?" What does this mean I asked in tone quite terse. "The strangest words I've ever seen In a book of verse!" "Where is the strength behind these words? Where does meaning lie?" "It is the language of today", Came the sad reply. "But surely man must realize That beauty cannot lie In something one can't understand!" "They don't", came the reply. And so, until my final breath With pen in hand I'll try To bring about the needed death Of the barefoot butterfly....... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
man you are good |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thanks, Walt. I just visited your void. The feeling's mutual. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
Wow... this one, like all your others, is wonderful! Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you have a good trip... I think everyone here will miss you! (I will, at least!) ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How did I miss this one! Lovely. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
You never cease to amaze, and this book in your desk drawer, I am sure it's a reader. You need to find an agent, you are much to talented to let pages of a potential best seller go un-noticed. I'll be there to buy the first copy. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
The crem da la crem.Wonderful. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you all, very much. |
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Jessica Pahre Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 12Fort Polk, LA, USA |
Just finished going way back through all of the postings and reading everything you've done. *big eyes* at the consecutive skill and quality. Just... wow. Where can I find more? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You would have to look inside my mind, Jessica. Thank you very much for the kind words. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sir Balladeer, If one were to venture into your mind I do beleive it would be difficult to return back to reality. For your words would graciously kidnap any and all that entered your domain of creativity. |
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