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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
For as much as a man can understand the emotions this poem involves, I do. Thank you so very much |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
very nice elvira. I just lost a cat whom I grew up with, this poem hits close to home. thank you for sharing. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
very nice elvira. I just lost a cat whom I grew up with, this poem hits close to home. thank you for sharing. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nice, Elvira. You gave me a jolt there for a moment. But I'm a person who gave a puppy to a grown daughter just so I could keep it in the family. So I am touched by such things. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked this poem. You are so brave to give up your baby! I'd have to hide in the closet with mama kitty til the kitten is gone!  |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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CastleHoward Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 20 |
elvira -- paws for thought indeed. Yes, alas, one day we all have to be parted from those we love... and from family... But hope those kittens find a good new home... could/should you not keep and cherish one though? |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Crystal Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62Hazel Park Mi U.S.A. |
I'm replying because I want to bring this to the top. More people should read this. I notice your poems always involve lots of emotion. I was told the best poems bring some kind of emotion. And this one like all the rest does. It brought tears to my eyes. This is a beautiful poem. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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