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Open Poetry #1

Faith

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-06-24 12:13 PM

I can't do what the others do
It's too late for me
I can only ask of you
Will you wait for me

If you do
I promise to
Make the world of you
And the sky
Won't ask me why
I take the world from you

I dip my hand into a silver stream
And i drink of you
I slip my mind into an endless dream
And I think of you

authors note: If you per chance liked this one please try "Heavens Touch" and "When I Think About You" buried deeper in this great forum thanks

chris
Junior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 29
rowlett, texas, usa

1 posted 1999-06-24 12:55 PM

thanks for the comments
gotta say, i hear ya, i spent the last three years making a living as a drummer. trying to make a living doing what you love is pure hell. but your words speak volumes, i'm on my way to check out the rest.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-08-20 03:27 AM

Walt~
Amazing that something you wrote only got one reply in the beginning.
Amazing ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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