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evolution Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22ma, usa |
anger, rage, frustration all bestowed upon me at once love, the klutz emotion, the catalyst of it all building up, pulling me, pushing me these emotions can make me alive they make me die salvation can only come from apathy apathy a place i can never achieve furious wrath conceived from blind love i am my own enemy my love my weapon i defeat myself with it i conceal the wounds with bandages never seen but never healed the pain is constant, never fleeting i become one with it, it is part of me it engulfs me until it is me all of me i surrender |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Very moving... I especially like the line "salvation can only come from apathy". It is definately a salvation I have yet to achieve. Well done! |
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