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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Something beautiful and breath-taking To mellow out your soul... Something heart-warming and relaxing has now become my goal... You want beauty from these words of mine- Sit back and close your eyes. I’ll entice you with my sweetest wine And promise no more lies... The fresh scent of newly cut grass and the rose-colored times in the sunrise is where I am. My paper is made of stardust. My pen, a magic wand. And I float about in fancy-free moments upon a pink, cotton-candy-like cloud. I hover above cities made up of tiny stars and planets. I surf over oceans, petting Orca’s back. And slowly, I find a sunset melting away In to the sky... So many, many muses... Candlelight and Romance... Fire, burning embers and kisses On a clear, starry night- fireflies in flight... and crickets in symphony... Mountains and Crystal lakes... The comfort of the cool, crisp air... And a pair of Lover’s Arms entangled... Ah, but then the Voice of the Song takes up my senses... I fly through half notes, whole notes, Rests and G-Clefs... Humming tunes that I touch freely... Up and Down, To and Fro... My song becomes a dance upon a checkered ballroom floor... And I am wearing an elegant night-dress, Like a princess or a queen... Stepping and swaying under moonlight, In love, I turn in to your face And on through my muses... Past my children’s laughter and into their eyes- Right in to that starry sparkle past their lashes... And then through a Darkness I fly toward a Light- Warm and inviting... loving and accepting... gentle and kind... Your love for me- Something beautiful and breath-taking, indeed. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Damn! This drove me to tears and that is hard enough to do on my best days. Today, I would've thought it impossible. Thank you, dear, for giving me exactly what I asked you for and so much more.  ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
The pleasure was all mine... ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
what a "Breath-taking" journey you have taken us on....loved this....great work! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank very much, Pepper! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exquisite work here One Voice. Indeed, your pen is magic. Michael |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Michael, thank you... Your compliment means a lot to me! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I think you have more than one voice! This sings like a host of angels...WOW! It IS breathtaking! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow...indeed breathtaking, one voice..truly phenomenal work...thank you for taking us along on this journey. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My love, I am glad to once again see this wonder you have crafted for me as you are the sole wonder of my world. Forever and always. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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