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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-08-31 11:26 AM


Something beautiful and breath-taking
To mellow out your soul...
Something heart-warming and relaxing
has now become my goal...
You want beauty from these words of mine-
Sit back and close your eyes.
I’ll entice you with my sweetest wine
And promise no more lies...

The fresh scent of newly cut grass
and the rose-colored times in the sunrise
is where I am.
My paper is made of stardust.
My pen, a magic wand.
And I float about in fancy-free moments
upon a pink, cotton-candy-like cloud.
I hover above cities made up of tiny stars and planets.
I surf over oceans, petting Orca’s back.
And slowly, I find a sunset melting away
In to the sky...

So many, many muses...

Candlelight and Romance...
Fire, burning embers and kisses
On a clear, starry night-
fireflies in flight...
and crickets in symphony...
Mountains and Crystal lakes...
The comfort of the cool, crisp air...
And a pair of Lover’s Arms entangled...

Ah, but then the Voice of the Song takes up my senses...
I fly through half notes, whole notes,
Rests and G-Clefs...
Humming tunes that I touch freely...
Up and Down, To and Fro...
My song becomes a dance upon a checkered ballroom floor...
And I am wearing an elegant night-dress,
Like a princess or a queen...
Stepping and swaying under moonlight,
In love, I turn in to your face
And on through my muses...
Past my children’s laughter and into their eyes-
Right in to that starry sparkle past their lashes...

And then through a Darkness I fly toward a Light-
Warm and inviting... loving and accepting... gentle and kind...
Your love for me-
Something beautiful and breath-taking, indeed.

©1999 Erin Solari

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-31 11:32 AM


Damn! This drove me to tears and that is hard enough to do on my best days. Today, I would've thought it impossible. Thank you, dear, for giving me exactly what I asked you for and so much more.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
2 posted 1999-08-31 11:35 AM


The pleasure was all mine...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-08-31 11:39 AM


what a "Breath-taking" journey you have taken us on....loved this....great work!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
4 posted 1999-08-31 11:40 AM


Thank very much, Pepper!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-08-31 12:31 PM


Exquisite work here One Voice.
Indeed, your pen is magic.

Michael

~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
6 posted 1999-08-31 06:27 PM


Michael, thank you... Your compliment means a lot to me!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



caroline
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since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
7 posted 1999-08-31 06:34 PM


I think you have more than one voice! This sings like a host of angels...WOW! It IS breathtaking!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
8 posted 1999-08-31 09:49 PM


Wow...indeed breathtaking, one voice..truly phenomenal work...thank you for taking us along on this journey.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

9 posted 1999-10-16 02:25 PM


My love, I am glad to once again see this wonder you have crafted for me as you are the sole wonder of my world. Forever and always.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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