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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
as I choose to be alone. Self-sacrifice I know something of, as my heart hardens to stone. I am tired of being misused, that is beyond my control. When offered friendship I have refused, for friendship carves up my soul. To passion I opened up my heart, a burden too much to bear. I knew better than this from the start, now I have hatred to spare. You see misery is my own fault, myself is the only one I blame. My entire world came to a halt, women are always the same. To be honest the problem is me, terribly twisted and flawed. I view myself pathetically, dramatically under-awed. Prevention of passion is the key, to the chains holding my Beast. Dispassion will prevent misery, keeping me from pain at least. I shall retire from writing verse, at least I will for awhile. I will return to living my curse, then plaster on a fake smile. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Such a sad verse. Your pain is your own because you make it so. Friendship is always available to you from this Female. I hope you find your peace. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
You stop writing verse and I'll kick your butt! Don't you dare! Lucie is right, your pain is your own because you make it so. And no matter what, you have a friend in me as well. You mean a lot to so many people here, Dream. Don't leave us in Darkness. We need your "illuminated" words to inspire us and touch our hearts, to remind us that we can feel. We need YOU! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Well. brother.. youre an awesome poet.. but it is up to you, we all need to take breaks at times.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
What better way to quell your misery Than pouring it into your poetry? You cheat yourself, if from your verse you part: Our sweetest songs are sung with breaking hearts ... Don't stop. You're good, we all enjoy reading your stuff, and darn it, we're just selfish that way ... you gotta share the wealth! Nocht |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I share my words, well I'm reminded of a song by Garbage, "Pour Your Misery Down on Me." ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i feel the same way dream my poetry is not making me happy anymore my soul is empty there is nothing left it seems i shall prolly too join you and mite hopefully tho return... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I don't understand this I guess... how can someone's actions be your fault? I have more to say but will do it privately! (Boy are you going to get an earful from me!)  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 09-01-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Still waiting for that earful, Lady deVine.  ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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