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Soundest Sleep " inspired by Michael
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Soundest Sleep " inspired by Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Pull you near in my embrace kiss you eyes - touch your face Hear you breathe a restful sigh - I sing to you a lullaby. I'm your angel watch you sleep - I'm the one your soul does keep so close in dreams we are as one - you are the wind I am the sun. I am the one inside your head - I sit here now, beside your bed - I sing to you a lullaby, I'm your angel please don't cry... Let me take away your pain let me tell the sky to rain upon your soul so it can fly across the ocean sand & sky... I hear you breathe a restful sigh - I sing to you a lullaby. My promise sir, to you I'll keep - Now drift away to soundest sleep........ ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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once Junior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 16 |
OH! This is exactly what I wanted to say to a friend of mine recently! I tried, but it didn't sound at all this nice! Wonderful! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Pure, simple, lovely!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Femme, This is so deeply touching. I was just wiping my eye when I got to the part about not crying - you knew huh? You have left me in awe once again. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
If I touched you, then I accomplished what I set out to do....thank you. You have my pen, which means you have my heart...you're so inspirational to this dead poet. I am indebted - - ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was simply beautiful!!! I loved it!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderful... great job, PFF! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Magnifique! pFF, you have a way of weaving your emotions into every word you write. For that reason alone you are a "must read". Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I have found myself searching out your poetry, PFF...and this is why! Absolutely beautiful. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
pFF, I join the chorus of well done. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful, sweet work. I thought this could be about a love or about watching a baby sleep..I work at a daycare center with infants (now that and school, ugh!) and that came to mind...exellent! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft... |
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