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Taking A Breather
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Taking A Breather |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
in at least one way is cruel. Many will reap what so few have sown, casual spite is their tool. That lesson was so hard to relearn, I won't forget it again. Their attentions you should always spurn, I am speaking of women. I set myself up for pain it's true, but only because I care. That decision I have come to rue, but what other choice is there? I can't give up on humanity, though on some I always will. God must laugh at this insanity, that makes me love women still. So I'll step back and watch the romance, until my scarred heart does heal. In time I'll give them another chance, then I'll pursue them with zeal. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is good, Dream |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good one! Seems different than some of your others (dare I say it's adorable?)...LOL  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh DreamEvil, this makes me so sad to here you talk like this.....you're too good of a man to have such a cold & broken heart......when you find that Zeal, I hope I'm one you chase! he he I ran distance in track, the "8 mile sprint..." Hope you're up for it ! I can still outrun any man!! You should see my legs......  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I also like it, Dream! I am a woman myself, and have seen so many other women act so cruelly-ouch.  ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Dream this is so sad! My heart cries for you! I am glad to see there is hope in the end. =) [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-30-99).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I've seen women tread hard on a guy they supposedly love and vice versa but I am very glad that you are still willing to give another a chance. Not all are heartbreakers. ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great poem DreamEvil. I can relate 100% to everything you've said here. Give it time, though, There's a good one out there somewhere I'm sure. Michael |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
This is a good poem brother.. but tis sad.. *hugs* ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
DE, yes, there is always hope! Not everyone is out to break hearts. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
poetFemmeFatale, The gift of your compassionate regard takes the chill from my weary heart. As for the chase, I much prefer to go slow and prolong the pleasure of the hunt. I am more than up for the chase, however I must tell you that I don't follow the rules. I must admit though, I'd let you win just to view those gorgeous legs from behind. Michael, my Dark friend, I knew that you would understand this one. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree whole heartedly nice ending |
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