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Open Poetry #1

Dear Mom,

garret
New Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 7
Harrisville, N.H 03450

0 posted 1999-06-22 10:21 PM

I can see you there
with miles of concrete
and traffic and people below.
The day is warm spring
and wind moves your hair
gently around.
The irony of nobody there
to catch a glimpse of the sky
the beautiful night sky,
is too much.
That old sun has etched its last line
for the last time
but you would hate for it
to go away.
Even in those final minutes
when the milky moon
becomes your eyes
you look up and wonder
what would be if you could
speak to the world
one last time.
Before the milky moon
became your eyes.

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

1 posted 1999-06-23 04:06 PM

This is sad, touching... I liked it.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

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