Open Poetry #1 |
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When the Moon Cries |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
What be this force which we call Love? It's power and portents, torture and torments, we know nothing of. Love and pain remain the same, both in force cause fears. Together as one, apart as none; both in faith bring tears. Tears of fire from a heart of ice doth prove a passion beyond mortal price. Tears of ice from a heart of flame show Love and treachery as the same, as one the source of mortal shame. Crystal tears of compassion shatter when they touch a heart of stone, leaving behind a path for the blind and lovers to walk alone. A woman's tears are precious beyond the years, when shed for reasons of Love. Women shine with loving light, as does the moon above. For all lovers lost, a price is paid, beyond mortal cost and all the World dies, when the Moon cries. ©1990 DreamEvil ------------------ Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities. [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 12-15-1999).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is quite a lovely piece - I'm happy to see a poet with such insight join our ranks.. Do grace us with more of your work. I'm looking forward to reading.... ![]() ------------------ Nan's Morsels netpoets.net/nan/index.html |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you,very much!! Most of what I write is dark and gothic, I was a little hesitant about posting anything. I will be sure to post more. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
Imaginative and well-written, I enjoyed reading it! ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you much my dear. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
You are welcome, of course... but you earned it! :-) I haven't yet figured out how to do the smiley faces and all that other cool stuff everyone else does... so that's my little smile ... hahaha. ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Mine too. :-) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To do "smilies" and "html" graphics - Click on "FAQ" in the upper right corner of the forum screen, and you'll find a tutorial for html, some graphics, and a list of smilies. ![]() |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you, Nan. |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
I'm very impressed. Hope to find more of the same from you. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I have much more. Thank you for your reply. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
This is sooooo exquisite! I'll add it to my favorites. (by one of my favorites!) ![]() |
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