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once Junior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 16 |
if you were to ask me, what would make me smile... i would tell you, let me crawl around inside your head. if you were to ask me, what would make me think... i would tell you, chose a topic that is interesting to you. if you were to ask me, what would i like to discuss... i would tell you, anything in the current issue of The Economist. If you were to ask me, what do I hate most in the world... I would tell you, being away from you. If you were to ask me, what I like most about you... I would tell you, the way I feel when I am with you, when I think of you, when I talk to you. If you were to ask me, what I like least about you... I would tell you, even the thing I like least is worth loving more than what I loved most about any other man i have ever loved. If you were to ask me what would make me cry.. I would tell you, anything that hurt you. If you would ask me, what made me love you... I would tell you, that you existed, that you are simply... you. My masasa. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
When what you "like the least" is turned into a positive, you've written a poem that I'll enjoy.....  |
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