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Open Poetry #1

My Light

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

0 posted 1999-08-27 03:51 AM

My Light

My dark, handsome friend -
You curl around me like a swirl of smoke.
You tangle yourself in my thoughts
And bend me toward you.
I see your many shapes-
You mask yourself as harmless to my heart.
You blend my love with your hatred
And you distort me.
I cannot stop you -
You have a hold of me too tightly now.
You've stolen all my happiness
And you hurt me still.
My light is gone now-
You have blown out the candle of my heart-
The fire that had yet to burn
With a love that's true.

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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-27 04:01 AM

Again, free verse isn't my thing, but you write quite vividly.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

2 posted 1999-08-27 06:41 PM

thank you, dream...

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