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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
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Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-26 12:29 PM


if i was wonderful as you
i wouldnt fear mirrors
i would love my reflection
i could walk down the road
and never be told which way to go
and if i was as great as you
i could make a woman smile
never live with denial
laugh my troubles away
maybe if i was special like you
i would never play the fool
follow all their rules
but im not all the above
and i cant bear my face
live life as the disgrace
so im wishing to be you
special wonderful great you
its never meant to be
ill always be just me
worthless forgotten me



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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
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glendale,ca.
1 posted 1999-08-26 02:51 PM


through your poetry i can tell you are wonderful..
RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-02-11 06:35 PM


this is good stuff! I really enjoyed it
you are not worthless at all!!!!!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-04 04:24 AM


darn...this is raw
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