Open Poetry #1 |
Butterfly Candy |
U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
So who are you O’ little one To catch my eye upon this earth, Why, I’m so light That when in flight My wings are twice my girth. And what do you do With wings today My angel dust prey tell me, Why, I dance in love For romance above And little flowers plenty. And why do you Dance so daintily In search for lovers handy? Why, I dance for joy A natures ploy But lovers I not any. So tell me when The time of day A lover you hope to match, Why, half past three Beyond oak tree A lover I hope to catch But tell me sir To who you are To ask me questions many, Who am I? A romantic guy And you my butterfly candy! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
With a twitch of your wand, I could see this as a child's poem. But for us Old Folks, all I can say is "Well done sir!" So glad to have you aboard! |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
So it is. I just felt like writing something light and refreshing and behold, it appeared as if by magic.. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
really nice read and you are right;it is refreshing. ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ditto on the refreshing! In fact, it kind of reminded me of..um...well, a nursery rhyme. Good job. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 08-31-99).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such Fun!!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This really makes me smile...a conversation with a butterfly. Enchanting! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved this! Everything flowed so well and the sentiment, ahh, tis grand! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is great! the title drew me in I love it!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...like it |
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