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With You I Go
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With You I Go |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA 
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By your side I stay Beside you is where I will be Never leaving your heart Never leaving your mind You talk to me when you're sad You mention me when you're hurting You may never even know That every where you are With you I will follow You may not ask me to walk by you You may not ask me to stay But the way that you talk to me Is at night you sit and pray I do my best to answer you But sometimes you seem to sad I try to let you know that Wherever you are With you I go So please don't be sad and don't worry because I promise to never leave your side together we will stay. Listen to me just this once this promise I must keep Because although you may not believe in me at all times With you I will stay! Love GOD (Don't ever doubt his power, his presence will prove you wrong) ------------------ \'''' *** ():~) ( *** /,,,, |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was good, and not what I expected at all! Very true, we may not ask Him to walk with us all the time, but He is always there. Well done! |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you very much for your words. I imagine that the title may be a little deceiving at first I apologize but I'm glad you liked my poem anyway. Thanks for the reply. And good luck in your writing whtdove ------------------ \'''' *** ():~) ( *** /,,,, |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I enjoyed this. Very powerful. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I need this in my life now |
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