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Open Poetry #1

Not that good...but I wrote it

Newguy
Junior Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 36
Moultrie, GA, USA

0 posted 1999-08-26 08:35 AM

Angels

Creatures....are they?
Mysterious...they are.
Beautiful, the essence of peace.
What holiness do they empower?
That of a God? That of the soul?
Staring up, past the clouds, past the reaches of the mind,
You can see them....you can feel them..
And they look, they guide, they tempt, they reach for you.
Embrace them, let the light smother you...and happiness, succes, and fulfillment
Will surely one day be yours.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 1999-08-26 01:04 PM

newguy dont be so hard on yurself in yur titles people skip it and dont know what they are missin nice imagery and good statement i like this one i do

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-08-26 10:27 PM

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-08-27 05:58 PM

Yep - Me too....

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