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The Quest |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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The Quest that I've begun will lead me to the key that unlocks every door as far as eye can see... Happiness there will I find - True love & understanding Doorways to all my wildest dreams In a world that's so demanding... The light of brightest Violet my aura all around - I'll bathe my every breath in her TIll peace and joy be found... My mind...a tool of wonder My soul...a blissful breeze I now can heal my broken spirit and set my heart at ease. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Great Job here Fatale!! wish I found the key.. I'm thinking..!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Found a hidden gem! Lovely poem PFF.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PFF, A lovely little poem very pleasant to read |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful...I'd like to get my hands on that key. Exellent work, I've come to expect it from you. Lovely.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
A beautiful poem femme. I have come to think of your aura as passionate reds and bright yellows but if you think purple...well...hmmm |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, PFF! I loved this one-it feels very peaceful. I like the soul-breeze metaphor. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Ah...now this is really nice. I should like to print this out and read it over and over, especially on stressful days. Wonderful! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thanks to all ! To Sea, my grandmother is the one who is into Aura's and such, I would like to see myself as more "electric & vivid", however she insists my aura is a calming peaceful violet...I am a peacekeeper at heart though, so maybe she knows what she's talking about. My personality is colorful, but my soul is calm....I fight with no one, however if provoked repeatedly, I eventually speak up and then boy, look out !! LOL ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Of late I havn't had much time to read, so I'm looking up some of those gems that got away. I echo the sentiments of all those who have come before... this is quite beautiful. A fine quest indeed. Thanks for sharing. |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Elizabeth is right ... the soul/breeze metaphor is very nice ... such a shame all all locks don't share the same key ... gotta find those keys on our own ... |
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