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Night, that Chills
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Night, that Chills |
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Capulet[R+J] Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41Calgary,Alberta Canada |
Hello!  Been gone a while, been workin =(In night, in dark I lay awake, to memories of my loving sake. I welcomed winter, and all it told, to warm myself in your loving hold. At the kiss of winters breath I chilled, at your loving tough my life stood still. In frozen night, my tears fell hard, to your loving words, the frozen part. To memories of what I welcomed then, I cry these tears at memories end. In winters night, my body chills, in the cold of snow, the frozen kills. Memories last, of the day I was weak, when your love was at end, and your love is what I seek. To the day you told me things do change, are now the only words I hear you say. True love will never come to end, the love I know you can not send. So hear I sit and pray to thee, to send this one time love to me. ------------------ Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds.. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautifully sad, Capulet. I certainly felt the pain in this piece. Great work!! Pssst- Check your mail. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Beautiful,loved it! Welcome Back!!------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Capulet[R+J] Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41Calgary,Alberta Canada |
Hello Just a quick note, I mis-spelleda line here. It should be 'at your loving touch' not 'loving tough' Thankyou for the kind words, and the welcome! ------------------ Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds.. |
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