navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #1 » Silence
Open Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Silence Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Loranth
Junior Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 19


0 posted 1999-08-25 12:26 PM


Silence is what I crave.
Silence from the Voices I hear.
The Voices talk too much.
The Voices tell me what to do.
Sometimes I listen,
Sometimes I ignore.
Mostly I give in.

Insanity comes easy,
Sanity is hard.
Hard to find,
Hard to hold on to.
Insanity gives me power.
Sanity drains me.
I love insanity.

The Voices never stop.
They are always there.
GIving suggestions,
Commanding my actions,
Deceving my senses,
Placing me into a different world.
The Voices I hate.

Pain comes when i try to shut Them out.
Pain so intense that i almost kill.
So the Voices stay.
Makeing me insane
More and more. . .
Day by day. . .
Death will silence the Voices.

------------------
If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.

© Copyright 1999 Loranth - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 1999-08-25 02:22 PM


Okay....so you just gotta be my long lost twin...seperated at birth....right?.....I have the same problem...but I know I'm insane.....God....ain't it fun though?
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-08-25 05:55 PM


Loranth,
Don't be coy, just enjoy. Nice job.

Loranth
Junior Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 19

3 posted 1999-08-26 09:49 AM


i like the feelings that in sanity brings on occation, unfortunately most of those feelings leave me feeling a bit psychotic so i try and keep my self sane, sometimes it works other times not.

------------------
If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me.

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
4 posted 1999-08-26 09:52 AM


Great poem!!!
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-08-26 01:41 PM


We all have to be a little bit crazy now and then. That's why we're poets! Some, like Toerag, Balladeer, LngJhnAg are a little closer to the edge than we'd like, but we put up with them anyway!


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #1 » Silence

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary