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Open Poetry #1

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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 1999-08-24 09:45 AM

I seek in my tomorrows
...memories of today,
To lose my pain and sorrows
...and smell life's sweet bouquet,
I'll once again feel summer rain
...fall from the skies above,
Hold you gently in my arms
...and whisper words of love,
On the winds a madrigal
...brings forth the songs of spring,
In pathless woods mine pleasure seek,
...the joys to me you bring,
I journey through the wall of tears
...to sunlit days and soothing clime,
I seek mirage of love gone by,
...I drift on River Time.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 1999-08-24 09:48 AM

o this is soo cool needed a smilin face and yuh gave it to me thanx

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-08-24 10:22 AM

Perfect! You are so good! This has to rank up there with your best, my friend, it's just lovely!

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

3 posted 1999-08-24 06:27 PM

Thank you Walt... glad you enjoyed it.
thx Poet deVine

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-08-27 12:31 PM

As I started to read this, I didn't think you'd be able to outdo the opening line - Then every one you wrote was better than the last...Awesome, my friend..

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

5 posted 1999-08-27 05:44 PM

Thank you for your kind comment Nan...

[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-27-99).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-08-28 10:19 PM

Absolutely breathtaking! I loved it.

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