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Wind through your hair |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
stand with me in the road of time and say the words id hoped to hide and ill give you all mine the sun will dance with us it must lesser winds shall blow through your hair like my hands that once were there men hope for the most but a peace so ordinary scares me more then the sound of empty sad thats lies here ------------------ |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
this is beautiful...if you don't mind me asking...what inspired you to write this? swan ------------------ "You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love somebody, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
this is beautiful...if you don't mind me asking...what inspired you to write this? swan ------------------ "You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love somebody, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely...sad but lovely!  |
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zipknee Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 35Oak Park, IL |
a beautiful and stirring poem. i really like it. |
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