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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-08-22 06:05 PM


The sun has now gone down
and soon will be back up
and in the time in between
how many dreams can I dream?

I'll dream of being close
of being hugged
of sharing worries with you
as one on one hearts beat as two

just as well they're dreams
for if I was, tonight you would know
my hands would be there holding you
never wanting to let go

savouring the love and care
the tingles that my body shares
just be thankful you're nowhere near
as hands on skin so tender and dear

the tips of my fingers say so much
with just that small feathery touch
but then I hear that very deep sigh
as I smile that smile as I touch your thigh

Nothing beats a woman dressed in love and a smile
as she touches and plays with all her feminine guile
just here and there, now and then
only one question remains in his mind: when?

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-22-99).]

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Craig
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1 posted 1999-08-22 06:12 PM



Superb poem Rainbow, your poetry gets better and better.

RainbowGirl
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2 posted 1999-08-22 06:45 PM


Craig: Thanks..but I guess I should change that really...because that's how it was, not how it now is...but tonight, of all nights, I wanted to be feminine and I guess that shows in my thoughts...women, huh?...lol..:-))

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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3 posted 1999-08-22 07:15 PM


Silly lady. *S* You could never be less than feminine! *G* Good poem!!!
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-08-22 07:49 PM


Suthern: To be feminine is how you are seen, shows in how you are held, how you are perceived in dreams...so I dream as me and hold back my fears..:-))

For dreams!...One cognac or two..

Love you lady!

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-08-22 08:06 PM


Through your words, you are beautiful in many eyes, I'm sure.
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 1999-08-23 03:07 AM


Balladeer

Thank you...keep me in your thoughts..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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