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Colin
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since 1999-06-05
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Callington, Cornwall, England

0 posted 1999-08-20 04:28 PM


Crickets' shrill staccato,
haunting hoot
of hunting owl,
drumroll of leathery wings
and bats' silent screams
swell and join
melodiously
to play me nature's lullaby

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?

© Copyright 1999 Colin Ramage - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-20 06:14 PM


I liked this..I enjoy the sounds of nature. It is peaceful and relaxing.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-08-20 07:43 PM


Eric....there is nothing more serene and peaceful than to lay outside under the stars and let nature sing you to sleep. Thanks for capturing that feeling
Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-08-20 10:46 PM


Beautiful..I also love the sounds of nature. You captured the feeling well.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood


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4 posted 1999-08-20 10:50 PM


"haunting hoot of hunting owl". Beautiful.
Colin
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since 1999-06-05
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Callington, Cornwall, England
5 posted 1999-08-22 04:03 AM


thanks for the replies people *8) I love living in the countryside, trouble is I fear my words don't do its beauty justice.

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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6 posted 1999-08-22 06:11 AM


That...was awesome!

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



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