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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-20 02:12 PM

Faerie enchantment dances from your eyes.
It has enraptured and captured my heart.
Like the newborn sun our passion does rise.
Your bewitching spell was only the start.

You cast your charms with ease born of the Sidhe.
Masculine sorcery casts it's own spell.
With tender regard I drew you to me.
Before you knew it you loved me as well.

Magical love has come to full flower.
Each breath we share serves to deepen that love.
Eyes wide we bask in each others power.
With tears of joy we thank the Gods above.

I enfold you in my arms tenderly.
Soon I know that holding you, I find me.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-20 02:13 PM

I was told that sidhe was pronounced "shee."

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-08-20 02:26 PM

That was beautiful.. I like this one brother

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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 1999-08-20 02:33 PM

Love has so many facets, I believe you portrayed the tender, joyful aspect very well. I enjoyed this muchly, I did.

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 1999-08-20 02:40 PM

Dimply Tanfastic!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Majere
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 32

5 posted 1999-08-20 02:59 PM

I liked this one. I've read a lot of your work here in the Open Poetry forum (I read the ones with the most responses first and comment on those that I find to be good) and as of yet have found little reason to comment on most of your stuff. But this poem was very good and I thought I should let you know.

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Such is the way to immortality ;)

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

6 posted 1999-08-20 03:03 PM

Majere? As in Raistlin and Caramon of Dragon Lance fame, or Kitiara?

Thank you for the reply.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-08-20 05:39 PM

What a wonderful piece Dream! It's warm and tender! Great Job!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 1999-08-20 07:14 PM

Ok sweetie, you win. You wrote something gentle and sweet! It truly flowed like silk through my hands. Loved it!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 1999-08-20 07:28 PM

Dream,
You did a wonderful job on this piece. Congrats!!! Thanks for posting it

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

10 posted 1999-08-20 09:20 PM

Delightful. I wonder if you would mind if I sent this one to my love (with full credit given, of course).

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Rita
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since 1999-07-19

Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540

11 posted 1999-08-21 01:09 AM

beautiful. shows how much emotion love fills us with.

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"And the day came, where the risk to remain tight in a bud, was more painful than the risk it took to blossom"

~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

12 posted 1999-08-22 03:13 AM

Dream, I absolutely love this piece! I don't even know what to say.... you know it's good when you've got me speechless!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

13 posted 1999-08-22 03:56 AM

Soft and flowing,very beautiful! I loved it

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

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