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Passing Time |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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This doesn't claim to be much of a poem, folks. *S* The title's fairly accurate... *G* So please bear with me. Can you hear me? Does my voice travel through the miles? I need you so; I miss your smiles. Do you know? Can I touch you? As I dream of you tonight Will arms that long to hold you tight My love show? It hasn't been such a long time Since your laughter, heart, and rhyme Brightened each hour of the day, But now you have to be away. I hope your treatment is first rate. Minutes tick by... How long the wait. Come back soon! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Missing someone special, Suthern? Don't worry, time does fly, just don't be watching the pots boil! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Belle He'll be back here before you know it. How could he resist your siren's call? hang in there, lady. Sue and I are thinking of you and Toe. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: Yup! LOL. And the more special the person, the more time drags. *S* LJA: Ya mean my hog callin' bellow? *G* Thanks, friend... big hugs to you both! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
He'll be back! HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Knowing him, he won't be the only one in stitches....so will the entire hospital staff!! Keep the positive thoughts flowing, Suthern. We're all with him. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Knowing Toe, I know he won't be down too long. I bet he's already begging for a laptop and a phone jack! Keep the faith honey..we're behind you two all the way! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I still haven't figured out all these online connections and not knowing what I know after reading the comments before I read the poem, I found it to be very well written. Now, knowning what I do, I enjoy it even more. Thanks for sharing Suthern. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you all... very much! *S* Playing with words helped pass the time... your support is incredible! Merci, muchos gracias, danke schoen! All good thoughts and prayers are greatly appreciated! I know he'll be back soon... if the nurses will only let him go! LOL. But I can't exactly blame them for wanting to keep him... I'll bet everyone of them ignores the IV and goes straight for the tush with the shots... just for the great view! LOL. And can you think of a better place to spend your break than with Mr. Entertainment? *G* hoot: Special thanks for liking the poem without knowing what I was moaning about. *G* And welcome back! *S* |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I think this poem is beautiful - I just felt the longing. I am glad that it's here for me to find and read. Kind of like that little jewel that brings pleasure (but I am still looking for that!). A |
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